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Kinda stuck after the first boss, very confusing but i get that its the first version tho

Eh its fine, but still sad that he decided to do this kind of thing just to feel superior, keep up at your pace, it has been a while that there were updates, but i think your story is okay to wait! I love what you're doing with your story!

Wow, and you proceed to go for insults and yet provide no actual argument to your point, indeed, such a good reviewer.  Honestly i have no reason to respond to more than 3 pharagraphs of insults directed at me and my family, with a addition to the insults to the writer, but as i said before, it's okay to not like the writing, but comparing to other types of games is useless. I won't argue further than this, if you wish to respond with more insults and repeat your same arguments go ahead man, i won't be the one reading or replying anymore. Oh and a plus, this is literally the second version, and you think its finished? I can't with what you're saying. Please go back to reading other stuff then, complete stuff.

Bro... This is a novel... Not a game... A visual novel, you just... Read... You don't play, you read... That's it, and you enjoy the story and arts, you don't go blasting demons or saving princesses, the whole point of a visual novel is to read... Just read. If you didn't like the actual premise of the story that's totally fine, honestly! You are allowed to not like the story, but here you're treating the whole experience as something that it isn't! Just, don't. You enjoy the writing or you don't, simple as that. But judging it for something that's not the main point or it isn't part of the experience at all is just bad review, watch out bruv.

I can't wait for the next update, i hope it comes soon enough! Really liking how the story is playing out!!